He has been sceard for beying late to the party and for up and and above by god and his date will be loved frin his breast but this is going to be his very last breath with is lover and when he saiys direct my sail he means take me were ever you want my life to lead too,a end, or a loveing last breath
Powered by our collective imagination
October 23, 2015 at 7:52 am
Hi Junior,
This does show that you’ve understand the basic meaning of this metaphor. It’s a long way off the badge for a couple of reasons – but the main one is that you will need to quote the text accurately: “He that hath steerage of my course…” and using quotation marks.
Then you’ll need to expand your explanation where you explore the relationship between the image created of a ship and Romeo himself.
I’d encourage you to keep working on this.
(also, there are some serious errors in spelling of words – the first step here is to make use of the WordPress spell-checker and also work with me to support the spelling of words that you’re mystified by)
CW